Content Area(s): Language Arts, Science
Grade(s): 3, 4
Invitation
How can the teacher guide students to use figures of speech to
enhance their writing? In what ways can students integrate similes
into writing about nature? The effective use of elaboration is a
major part of successful writing and one form of elaboration is the
use of similes. This unit gives students fundamental knowledge of the
structure of similes and gives them the opportunity to use similes in
their writing.
Tools
Computers, printer, word processing software; Template: Simile
Planning Worksheet; items found in nature, glue, large pieces of
black construction paper, colored string, Sign of the Beaver
by Elizabeth George Speare, Quick As a Cricket by Don and
Audrey Wood
Situations
This unit occurs both in the classroom and outdoors. The simile
activity requires one class period for the nature hunt and
collection, one period for drawing the nature item and drafting the
simile, and one period for publishing the similes and sharing
them.
Interactions
The students use a combination of reading skills including read
aloud, guided reading, shared reading, and buddy reading to complete
the novel and other stories and poems about similes and nature. They
conference with peers about their similes. The teacher leads a nature
hunt, and guides students to come up with similes as they walk, e.g.
"The clouds are as fluffy as __________". "The wind blows like
__________". Back in the classroom, she models some basic
word-processing skills such as centering the title of the simile,
changing line spacing, and choosing the font size.
Standards (Texas Essential Knowledge and
Skills)
The students generate, organize, connect, and express ideas in a
variety of ways. The students interpret, produce, and evaluate visual
images for meaning. The students write for a variety of purposes and
audiences. The students recognize the features of familiar genres,
including poems.
Tasks
The students read The Sign of the Beaver and Quick As a
Cricket.. They take a nature hunt around the school grounds and
gather nature items. They draw pictures based on the nature items and
write a simile using "like" or "as" to go with their pictures. They
type their similes, print them, cut them out, and glue them to their
books. They share their books with the class.
Assessment
The teacher assesses similes based on the use of "like" or "as" and
the appropriateness of the comparison used.