PIRATEÕS TREASURE
Highland
Park 3rd graders edited this entire document, which comes pre-loaded
with dozens & dozens of word-processing mistakes throughout the story,
& with extra-tricky mistakes to fix toward the end. Have a look at what a
mess this story started out as before 3rd graders cleaned it all up!

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MISSING SPACES:
"Tensteps
from theporchand twentystepsfrom
the rosebushes," growled Bluebeard.
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MISSING LETTERS:
This is wht
Jimy heard in hs dream one nght. "There be trsure thre! Aawrgh."

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So the nexst dayi Jimmy began to ditg.
He dug unttil the hole waas deeep and the dirrt pile was hiigh.

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(DRAG & HIGHLIGHT OR ONE AT A TIME)
He kept diggingfff. The hole gottttt deepqqqer and thejjj dirt pile gotjkl higher.

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He dug until school the hole was deepest and
books the dirt pile was backpack at its highest. He sighed.
"I'm too tired tired. I can't canÕt dig anymore." Then he spied spied something...

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A PHRASE (UNDERLINED):
(HIGHLIGHT
PHRASE & RETYPE PHRASE)
...buut itt waes onnly one of Woofy's bones. Instead of treasure, all Jimmy haSd waSs a doGg bone, a hole, and a bigg pille off dirrrt to fill it in with. He thought "That pirate liiied two mne!"

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A WORD:
(MISSING
WORDS: saw, had, hands, biggest smile)
But when Jimmy's mother what he done, she clapped
her and smiled the youÕve ever seen.
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PUNCTUATION:
(QUOTES
AT BEGINNING & END, 1 APOSTROPHE, 3 COMMAS, 3 PERIODS, 1 $ SIGN)
Oh thank you Jimmy I always wanted a nice bush
planted there and this is just right Heres 5.00 for
digging that hole
EXTRA
SKILLS TO PRACTICE:
MOVE
TEXT UP:
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DELETE KEY)
Hello
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this text up below the word ÒHelloÓ
Highland
Park
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this text up below the word ÒHighland ParkÓ
I
like computers!
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this text up below the word ÒI like computers!Ó
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TEXT DOWN:
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RETURN KEY)
Move
every number down to make a list: 1st 2nd 3rd
4th 5th 6th 7th 8th 9th
10th
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every word down to make a list: crawl walk run jump fly
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Move
every sentence down to make a list: I can crawl. I can walk. I will run. I like
to jump. I wish I could fly.
Move
the first 3 sentences down together & the last 3 sentences down together to
make 2 paragraphs: I can crawl quickly. I can walk pretty fast too. I will run
super fast. I like to jump high. I wish I could fly high too. Oh well, IÕll
just stay on the ground!
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DROP)
(5)It
was fun. (4)He was nice. (3)And
I built him a tower. (2)and I pushed him. (1)So I hugged the baby.
THE END! ;-)