PIRATEÕS TREASURE

Highland Park 3rd graders edited this entire document, which comes pre-loaded with dozens & dozens of word-processing mistakes throughout the story, & with extra-tricky mistakes to fix toward the end. Have a look at what a mess this story started out as before 3rd graders cleaned it all up!

 

 

 

 

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"Tensteps from theporchand twentystepsfrom the rosebushes," growled Bluebeard.

 

 

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This is wht Jimy heard in hs dream one nght. "There be trsure thre! Aawrgh."

 

 

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So the nexst dayi Jimmy began to ditg.

He dug unttil the hole waas deeep and the dirrt pile was hiigh.

 

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(DRAG & HIGHLIGHT OR ONE AT A TIME)

 

He kept diggingfff. The hole gottttt deepqqqer and thejjj dirt pile gotjkl higher.

 

 

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(DOUBLE CLICK, DRAG & HIGHLIGHT, OR ONE AT A TIME)

 

 

He dug until school the hole was deepest and books the dirt pile was backpack at its highest. He sighed.

 

"I'm too tired tired. I can't canÕt dig anymore." Then he spied spied  something...

 

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(HIGHLIGHT PHRASE & RETYPE PHRASE)

 

...buut itt waes onnly one of Woofy's bones. Instead of treasure, all Jimmy haSd waSs a doGg bone, a hole, and a bigg pille off dirrrt to fill it in with. He thought "That pirate liiied two mne!"

 

 

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(MISSING WORDS: saw, had, hands, biggest smile)

 

But when Jimmy's mother what he done, she clapped her and smiled the youÕve ever seen.

 

ADD PUNCTUATION:

(QUOTES AT BEGINNING & END, 1 APOSTROPHE, 3 COMMAS, 3 PERIODS, 1 $ SIGN)

Oh thank you Jimmy I always wanted a nice bush planted there and this is just right Heres  5.00 for digging that hole

 

 

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Hello

 

 

Move this text up below the word ÒHelloÓ

 

 

Highland Park

 

 

Move this text up below the word ÒHighland ParkÓ

 

 

I like computers!

 

 

Move this text up below the word ÒI like computers!Ó

 

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Move every number down to make a list: 1st 2nd 3rd 4th 5th 6th 7th 8th 9th 10th

 

 

Move every word down to make a list: crawl walk run jump fly

 

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Move every sentence down to make a list: I can crawl. I can walk. I will run. I like to jump. I wish I could fly.

 

 

Move the first 3 sentences down together & the last 3 sentences down together to make 2 paragraphs: I can crawl quickly. I can walk pretty fast too. I will run super fast. I like to jump high. I wish I could fly high too. Oh well, IÕll just stay on the ground!

 

REORDER TEXT (HIGHLIGHT & DRAG & DROP)

(5)It was fun. (4)He was nice. (3)And I built him a tower. (2)and I pushed him. (1)So I hugged the baby.

 

THE END! ;-)